Ghost in Hell

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blafiriravt

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Anger bubbles and changes to hate,
as fear and respect start to dissipate,
a burning fire roaring inside,
as you play your games and ruin my life,
a face shadowed by mimicks and lies,
things true to yourself you start to despise,
a venomous bite starts to infect,
as poison courses leaving nothing left,
a person I once loved and knew,
but now I can see the demons inside of you,
bridges burning to the ground,
as evil lurks all around,
my eyes lose focus of the love inside of you,
for it has been replaced with a soul that's black and blue,
clouds puke out acid rain,
and all around the color fades,
life is precious and re arranges,
but this time you can't undo this,
worlds apart for reasons unkown,
this path you took with nowhere to go,
cold alone and filled with despair,
you dropped us all without a care,
and when the time finally comes,
you better be prepared to run,
as the wounds of theirs start to heal,
your presence is something they won't feel,
a ghost locked in another world,
your jaws wired shut and your fingers curled,
fire burning all around,
and shadows melting to the ground,
watching waiting trying to scream,
as your nightmare eats you slowly sweet,
I'm the only one who sees you beg and plea,
but you won't get anything from me.

Brandon Lafirira
 

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This one is a little dark, but you sure do have a gift, Brandon.
 

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Me likey! I can see Tom Araya of Slayer screaming this into his microphone.
 

blafiriravt

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emysemys said:
This one is a little dark, but you sure do have a gift, Brandon.

I'll post a few in the near future that are a little more easy for the heart to digest lol. Thank you for your compliment as well :D :D

harris said:
Me likey! I can see Tom Araya of Slayer screaming this into his microphone.

Haha. Thanks man! That's a really cool compliment! Slayer is an original fave of mine :D
 

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Hahah. Thank you so much Mary Anne :D :D :D I don't know about contests... I'd get too nervous if people critiqued and judged them, lol. I like just posting on TFO. It makes me feel famous :D
 

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WOW!! Thank you SO much! Jeez, you hooked me up :D :D I will check em all out and keep posted on what I can come up with. Thanks a ton Mary Anne!!! I could give you a big hug!
 
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